Dil Nasamajh

Hi friends,

This one is dedicated to one of my very special friend.I wrote this piece long back for her…. Just tried  to fill this poem with her feelings.. Thought of sharing it with u guys… Hope you will like it 🙂

जो  बैठे  है  हमारी  याद  में ,
हमें  उनके  प्यार  की  कदर  नहीं ,
वो  हमें  देते  है  दुआए ,
हम  उनकी  दुआओ  के  काबिल  नहीं ,
हम  चाह  कर  भी  उनका  अच्छा  न  कर  पाए ,
इस  बात  को  झुटला  सकते  नहीं ,
यह  दिल  तो  हम  सबको  नचाता  है ,
हम  इसके  बस  में  है ,यह  हमारे  बस  में  नहीं ,

और  जिन्हें  हमने  चाहा  दिलो  जान  से ,
उन्हें  हमारी  ज़रुरत  नहीं ,
उनकी  बेरूखी  का  नतीजा  है  यह  ,
की  आज  हमें  खुद  की  ही  खबर  नहीं ,
य़ू  तो  उनकी  बेवफाई  को  कभी  भूल  न  पायेंगे  हम ,
पर  आज  भी  आँखों  में  उनकी  सूरत  है  वहीं ,
खुश  हों  लेते  है  औरो  को  खुश  करने  के  लिए ,
पर  दिल  की  ख़ुशी  तो  कही  खो  सी  गयी ,

जो  बैठे  है  हमारी  याद  में ,
हमें  उनके  प्यार  की  कदर  नहीं ,
और  जिन्हें  हमने  चाहा  दिलो  जान  से ,
उन्हें  हमारी  ज़रुरत  नहीं ..

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30 comments

  1. Rashmi · February 12, 2010

    Lovely !! I could relate it to myself.

  2. Anonymous · February 12, 2010

    Kya likha hai. Maan gaye aapko !

  3. Prakhar · February 12, 2010

    Bahut khoob sis!!

  4. Rahul · February 12, 2010

    God bless you !

  5. Sachin · February 12, 2010

    Am Touched..Keep writing..

  6. Anonymous · February 13, 2010

    Tussi great ho 🙂

  7. Ajay · February 13, 2010

    Dil khush kar ditta !!

  8. Anonymous · February 13, 2010

    I just came accross your blog.. You are too good man !! Loved it.

    Good Luck !!

  9. beyond the sky · February 13, 2010

    beyond the sky said…
    Came across ur blog thru a friend, beautiful collection of poems 🙂 loved it! and how bout the title “tyranny of love” ??

  10. Vatsala · February 13, 2010

    Title – ना समझ दिल की कोई समझ ही नहीं
    then opening lines will flow in – जो बैठे है हमारी याद में ,
    हमें उनके प्यार की कदर नहीं ,
    और जिन्हें हमने चाहा दिलो जान से ,
    उन्हें हमारी ज़रुरत नहीं ..
    But this is just a suggestion – feel free to add or subtract to it.
    Aapne kabhi Madhushaala padhi hai?

  11. Monika Arya · February 13, 2010

    @beyond the sky .. Thank you sooo much :):)I am glad ..u liked it :):)
    Tyranny of love is good..Searching something in hindi..:):)

    @Vatsala .. Thanks so much..dil nasamjh is really good 🙂

  12. Jam · February 13, 2010

    Wonderful!!

  13. Anonymous · February 13, 2010

    Wonderful Monika!!! U r multi-talented!!! And so good too!!! 🙂 Is there anything you are bad at?

  14. Sundar Rajan G S · February 13, 2010

    Nice poem.. My hindi is improving day by day 😛 thanks for figuring out the nuances of your beautiful poems..

  15. Monika Arya · February 15, 2010

    Thank you soo much.. What should i say now.. am really happy that u guys liked it:):).. Thank you 🙂

  16. Mohan · February 15, 2010

    dil cho liya aapki is kavita ne..

  17. Anonymous · February 15, 2010

    Well done!!

  18. Raju · February 15, 2010

    Wah !! Kya baat Hai 🙂

  19. Anonymous · February 15, 2010

    Multi Talented Kid !! I wonder how many more are going to come out 🙂

  20. kashmakash · February 15, 2010

    Apne mere dil ko choo liya.Itni saralta se itna gehra ahsaas..want to see more poems of urs.

  21. Anonymous · February 16, 2010

    Kamaal hai 🙂

  22. Anonymous · February 20, 2010

    Was a reader of ur blog sometime back… just came back again after a long time. this poem is absolutely amazing and so true. i just love to read ur poems 🙂 carry on
    and ya gud luck with the guitar lessons.

  23. Monika Arya · February 22, 2010

    Thank you soooo much 🙂

  24. Saurabh Gupta · May 23, 2010

    awesome piece!!! 🙂 🙂
    happens to many of us. 😛

  25. abhi · May 23, 2010

    wow monika i just loved it……..ur too gud

  26. Monika Arya · May 23, 2010

    Thanks a lot abhi and saurabh :):) ..

  27. incackito · May 26, 2010

    Just want to say what a great blog you got here!
    I’ve been around for quite a lot of time, but finally decided to show my appreciation of your work!

    Thumbs up, and keep it going!

    Cheers
    Christian, iwspo.net

  28. Monika Arya · May 26, 2010

    Thanks a lot christian ..am really glad that you liked it 🙂

  29. Anonymous · May 27, 2010

    Lovely!!

  30. Hitesh · June 2, 2010

    what to say …..i think i should get a class how to write a good poem…..

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